Sorry for so many posts
on a similar subject matter. I just go
where my impulses take me. I am eminently
grateful that they are at least taking me somewhere.
The writer’s obsessing question is:
“What story am I going to tell?”
And, if you’re writing comedy, the immediate paralleling
concern:
“How am I going to make it funny?”
Now…
If the story you choose to tell is a generically funny one,
the second question has been automatically taken care of: You just (as skillfully as you are able to)…
Tell that (generically funny) story.
(Note: I am about,
before venturing further, to discuss situation comedy stories that are
generically funny, i.e., the kind I never favored and was incapable of
writing. Readers. Do you know how agonizing it is to discourse
upon matters you know virtually nothing about?
How uncomfortable and embarrassing it is, how torturously painful it
feels to dive in, knowing the results will lack the clarity and persuasiveness
of personal experience? I am juggling in
the dark here, people. A little
sympathy, tolerance and understanding, if you will. Thank you.)
Moving on from the bracketed plea for forgiveness…
“Mistaken Identity.” “The
Practical Joke.” “The Misinterpreted
Exchange.” To name but three such genres,
because I cannot think of any more, though I am confident there are others.
Comedy premises that have you laughing from the get-go,
mirthfully anticipating their hilarious resolutions. Are these generically funnily-premised
stories difficult to write? Everything is. But they enjoy the distinct advantage of
radiating “funny signals.” You know it’s
a comedy, and you are pre-programmed to laugh.
And have been from the
earliest days.
CAVE MAN
STORYTELLER: “So… Are you ready
for this?…Zog steps up to this big…behemoth
– you know how he walks with that
confident swagger… DEMONSTRATING ZOG’S SWAGGERING STRUT)… and he says,
(IMITATING HIS VOICE) ‘I am Zog! Zog fears nothing!’ (LEANING IN CONSPIRATIORIALLY) The Giant Whatsit takes one step towards him
(BARELY CONTROLLING HIS CHUCKLING DISDAIN)… Zog immediately drops his spear and
runs away screaming “Help me! Help
me!” Who knew that dopey Neanderthal could
move that fast!”
And of course, Zog is standing directly behind him.
The funny story (and situation) offers an advantageous “leg
up” when entertaining an audience. The “laugh
inducers” are inherently built in. You
call a character “Jack Tripper”, and for eleven years, you just watch him trip.
Hyever…
To develop strategies for “comedifying” what are
substantially dramatic storylines…
(I’m not saying it’s harder.
Yeah, I probably am. Though I
admittedly know better. “Good” is good,
in whatever genre you choose to write.
And, of course, vice versa.)
I was never drawn to the hyper-dramatic comedies, favored by
the Norman Lear Company which did episodes on racism, the evolving roles of women
and pregnancy ending. To me, though such
offerings were often interstitially hilarious – complements of some of the
greatest comedy writers from an earlier era (Your Show of Shows, I Love
Lucy) – in the final analysis, I
did not enjoy being lectured to, and my ultimate reaction to those series was
“Pasadena.”
As my career choices reflect, I was more personally attracted
to the individualized, human foible storylines favored by The Mary Tyler Moore Show and its similarly focused
successors. On the comedy/drama
continuum, these shows reflected a stylistic middle ground, believable as
everyday experience, situated somewhere between farce and hysterectomy.
Concerning my own output…
My first pilot, Best
of the West (1981-82), contrasted
between the West of the imagination with the West as it actually was. The series’s most successful comedic moments
played directly on that discrepancy.
Family Man’s (1988)
pilot episode came from a story I was told by a woman I cared about who, at a
party, had heard the party’s hostess assert, “Any woman who doesn’t work isn’t
worth talking to.” The Family Man wife was a woman whose job of
choice was raising three children at home.
Major Dad (1989)
was premised on the inevitable fireworks attendant to a “lifer” Marine’s
marrying a left-leaning newspaper reporter with three daughters.
And Island Guy
(circa 1996), a pilot I made but which did not go to series, involved the
confrontation between untrammeled Polynesia and capitalistic USA.
None of these, as you can see, are “Two guys dress up in
drag so they can live in a female dormitory.”
(Or a guy living with two women, hoodwinking their landlord into
believing he’s gay.) They are, for
better or worse, “comedies of ideas.”
No judgments. Everyone
does what they do. The only standard is
how skillfully you pull it off. (And the ratings, the audience’s
preferences being a perennial confusion to me.)
My most clear-eyed self-assessment suggests an arguable
imbalance in my recipe, the dramatic storylines overshadowing the comedy,
producing a high-minded confection, lacking playfulness and fun.
That was my
combination, and I did pretty with it.
Though I was never the most popular
ice cream flavor, I provided a highly palatable pistachio.
Today…well, the recent Emmy
nominations, involving niche favorites (the contemporary television business
model no longer requiring a mass audience) dredged up the question concerning
the ever-increasing “blurring of the line” between comedy and drama.
But I shall defer such observations until tomorrow. (As I have illuminated you sufficiently
today.)
When you come to write those observations, I hope you can explain to me why NURSE JACKIE and ORANGE IS THE NEW BLACK class as "comedy" in this year's Emmy award nominations.
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